Tuesday 27 May 2014

The earth



The Earth

The earth is a planet in the solar system. The earth orbits around the sun. The earth contains many form of life because it has an atmosphere.
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  1. Anonymous28 May 2014 at 16:51

    Your introduction is very precise Phillipa. Well done. How could you connect your sentences to create more of a flow for the reader?

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